Completley (sestina)
One of the first forms I wrote was the sestina and it is my favorite but since my loss of my community I have none in my repertoir of piffle. So here is my latest atempt with a tiny twist in the first...
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Quote:as much you now have grave thoughts upon the demons we both have within Quote:to follow your hearts innermost thoughts and explore erotic fantasia completly Quote:I have love for you completely...
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Well Bri (and this is only inn jest) I have been horny and I have been on a journey but never have I been on a hourney.lol Thanks for the dcomments I was going to attempt a reverse shrinking sestina...
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OMG!!! Does look a little odd huh? ROFLMAO!!! Let me fix, quick... *ZOOM* ;o) *Stroke my Madness and forever feel, What's write inside me*
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i am reading along thinking "i understand the feelings here" and i smile with when you end with Quote: I have love for you completely beyond lost whipers and passing thoughts " I am so thoroughly into...
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Thanks for the read and the reply secret. Wolf Image by FlamingText.com
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A journey indeed...through love and adoration... ...interesting way of dealing with S1...although it does require a tiny bit of poetic licence with for/fore... Either way, a tricky form...deftly...
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I like the twist of S1. It opens the poem nicely, I think. I have never written a sestina, so I am not familiar with the form, but well, I did enjoy the journey (hourney! lol yeah that got me to...
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Thanks Donna alot of people this that it is a hard form and it can be very challenging if you are not careful as to the choosing of the Six main words. Thank for the encouragement on the twist. Now I...
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Bryan, I stand in awe.. amazed at the beauty of this piece. These two verses speak to me as if in a trance. WOW! Thanks for sharing this gem! What dear heart is love for but to free that which lays...
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Thank you Lady Z for the very knid words. Blush Wolf Image by FlamingText.com
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Bryan, if this is your first one for some time, I have to say that your touch is still there....... AWESOME....... I have only written one sestina, it was a halloween one, to write them as you prefer...
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I STILL have yet to write in this form. But it's one I always say I'll try "someday". You've done an excellent job, so perhaps I'll turn to you with some tips if I get stuck in my attempt.
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Damn, Damn...damn...I could quote the whole thing easily...so much truth in the beginning and so much love in the end...sheer perfection!!
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Raine your comment is the exact way I tried to portray this piece as one of a relationship. If you start off with so much truth the love is so much more magnified. Thank you for reading. Bryan Image...
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Thanks Jim It has been about three years since I wrote one and I think it was overdue. This is the first form I wrote and it will always have a special place to me. Again it is great to see you Jim...
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Traci my poetic door is always open for you if you need any help . Though after reading your "first" I don't expect to be getting any midnight calls. Thank you for reading and writing. Wolf Image by...
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